【写作要求】
学校英语社团在举办征文比赛,请你根据以下提示内容,写一篇题为The Person Who Has Influenced Me Most的英语文章。内容要点如下:
1. 对我影响最大的人是我的妈妈,她四十几岁;
2. 她总是耐心倾听我的问题,并建议我如何解决它们;
3. 作为一名医生,她常说再怎么仔细也不为过。她总是加班,把她的大部分时间都奉献给了工作;
4. 所以,我认为她不仅是位好妈妈,也是名好医生。
5. 我希望
要求:1. 内容须包含所有要点,语句通顺,意思连贯;
2. 词数90个左右;
3. 第5点的内容需展开合理想象,用2-3句话补充完整。
【优秀满分范文】
My mother is the person who has influenced me most.
She is in her forties. She always listens to my problems patiently. And she advises me how to solve them. As a doctor, she often says she cant be too careful. She often works extra hours. She has devoted most of her time to her work. So I think she is not only a good mother but also a good doctor.
I hope I can be a person like her. I also hope she will pay more attention to her own health. Shed better have more time to relax herself.