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dogs, along with cats, are thought to be as the most favored as pets in america today.?this wonderful animal is valued for their companionship, protection and friendship they bestow to their owners. so it is hardly suprising to find dogs or cats on television shows and movies and who could not forget lassie, one of the most famous canine of all time.?
for the wonderful companionship this pet gives, it is vital the owner does his or her share of responsibilities that comes on owning a dog.?the owner has the obligation to make certain that their pet receives adequate attention and affection, adheres to a nutritious diet, have regular visits to the vet for a check up or for shots and a plenty amount of exercise to keep them healthy and mentally alert.
although it takes time and effort to care for your dog, the rewards ultimately pay off.? in return for their owner caring efforts, the dog will grant them unwavering loyalty, their affection and most important of all, the desire to please you.?this is probably the reason why people sometimes prefer this exquisite creature than their own and for years to come canines will remain people favorite pet.
the snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places. 蛇是一种又长又瘦的动物，生活在草丛里和阴暗的地方、a snake has no legs or feet, but it can move very fast on its stomach.蛇没有腿和脚，靠胃部飞快的移动前进。 snakes usually have green, yellow or black skins, which make them difficult for their enemies to find them. 蛇常常有绿色，黄色和黑色的皮肤，使得敌人很难找到他们。some kinds of snakes live in water. they can swim as freely as fish.有些蛇生活在水里，他们能像鱼一样飞速的游移。
snakes are cold-blooded animals. in winter they hibernatein holes which are narrow enough only to hold the snakes' bodies. the snakes can sleep through a whole winter without eating and moving. they can not feel any pain. the hibernation period lasts about five months. when spring comes, the snakes come out and begin their normal life.
snakes can take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs,birds' eggs, pests and so on. people sometimes can see a snake eat a sparrow. first it moves close to the sparrow, then it puts out its tongue and brings the sparrow into its mouth and swallows it, which makes a lump in the snake's body. after some time the lump disappears.
as snakes are dreadful-looking, people are afraid of them. many people drive them away whenever they see snakes. but in chinese fairy tales, snakes are by no means bad. they seem to have human feelings. they can change into pretty girls. people like and respect them. the most well-known is the story about the white snake and the blue snake.共2页，当前第1页12
dogs, along with cats, are thought to be as the most favored as pets in america today.?this wonderful animal is valued for their companionship, protection and friendship they bestow to their owners. so it is hardly suprising to find dogs or cats on television shows and movies and who could not forget lassie, one of the most famous canine of all time.?
for the wonderful companionship this pet gives, it is vital the owner does his or her share of responsibilities that comes on owning a dog.?the owner has the obligation to make certain that their pet receives adequate attention and affection, adheres to a nutritious diet, have regular visits to the vet for a check up or for shots and a plenty amount of exercise to keep them healthy and mentally alert.
although it takes time and effort to care for your dog, the rewards ultimately pay off.? in return for their owner caring efforts, the dog will grant them unwavering loyalty, their affection and most important of all, the desire to please you.?this is probably the reason why people sometimes prefer this exquisite creature than their own and for years to come canines will remain people favorite pet.
the snake is a long and thin animal that lives in grass or other dark places. 蛇是一种又长又瘦的动物，生活在草丛里和阴暗的地方、a snake has no legs or feet, but it can move very fast on its stomach.蛇没有腿和脚，靠胃部飞快的移动前进。 snakes usually have green, yellow or black skins, which make them difficult for their enemies to find them. 蛇常常有绿色，黄色和黑色的皮肤，使得敌人很难找到他们。some kinds of snakes live in water. they can swim as freely as fish.有些蛇生活在水里，他们能像鱼一样飞速的游移。
snakes are cold-blooded animals. in winter they hibernatein holes which are narrow enough only to hold the snakes' bodies. the snakes can sleep through a whole winter without eating and moving. they can not feel any pain. the hibernation period lasts about five months. when spring comes, the snakes come out and begin their normal life.
snakes can take many things as food, such as mice, sparrows, frogs,birds' eggs, pests and so on. people sometimes can see a snake eat a sparrow. first it moves close to the sparrow, then it puts out its tongue and brings the sparrow into its mouth and swallows it, which makes a lump in the snake's body. after some time the lump disappears.
as snakes are dreadful-looking, people are afraid of them. many people drive them away whenever they see snakes. but in chinese fairy tales, snakes are by no means bad. they seem to have human feelings. they can change into pretty girls. people like and respect them. the most well-known is the story about the white snake and the blue snake.共2页，当前第1页12
你喜欢小白兔吗？告诉你，我可喜欢小白兔啦！你看，小白兔全身长着雪白的绒毛，没有一点杂色。它一蹲下来，就 像一个魄的绒球，多可爱！它有一对红眼睛，就像两颗嵌在雪球上的红宝石，特别美。小白兔的耳朵和别的动物不一样，长得比较长，只要听到一点轻微的声音，它就会把耳朵唰地竖起来向四面转动，警惕地注视着周围 的动静。 最有趣的要算是小白兔嘴巴了。别的动物只有上下，两瓣嘴唇，可它呢，上嘴唇豁成两半，加上下面一瓣嘴唇，就成三瓣嘴了，它长成了这三瓣嘴是为了好看吗？不！因为小白兔最爱吃大萝卜，小嘴张不大，怎么能吃大萝卜呢？现在有了这三瓣嘴，它不就可以张大嘴巴大口大口地吃了吗？小白兔的前腿短，后腿长，走起路来总是一蹦一跳，它那屁股后面贴 着的短尾巴，也跟着一撅一撅的，怪有趣的。 我想，经我这么一介绍，你一定也喜欢上小白兔了吧！
这篇文章的小作者写小白兔，做到了以下几点：
１、有一定的顺序。小作者先从整体观察小白兔，写小白兔的全身毛 色，再观察身体的各部分，从头部，到身体四肢，再到尾巴依次写下来。
２、抓住动物的外形特点来写，写全身，突出雪白的绒毛，写眼睛，主要写眼睛红，写耳朵，主要写耳朵的长，写嘴巴，突出小白兔的 三瓣嘴，写腿，只写长和短，写尾巴，突出短。尤其是三瓣嘴，小作者写得比较详细，因为三瓣嘴是小白兔和其它动物比较起 来，显得很特别的地方。小作者还写了自己对小白兔为什么有三瓣嘴 的猜想。
３、抓住动物的活动特点。如文中只要听到一点轻微的声音，它就会把耳朵唰地竖起来向四面转动走起路来总是一蹦一跳，短尾巴 也跟着一撅一撅的就写小白兔的活动特点。
４、注意用词准确，尽量做到语句优美。耳朵竖起来，尾巴贴 在屁股后面，竖贴等这些词用得很准确，小作者还用了打比方的句子。如它一蹲下来就像一个白色的绒球，它有一对红眼睛，就像两颗 嵌在雪球上的红宝石形容了小白兔的毛色白，给人毛茸茸的感觉，眼睛红、亮。读了这篇文章，确实让人感到小白兔的可爱。
二、写好外形
小动物的外形（就是样子）长得非常有趣可爱。怎样才能把它们有趣可爱的样子写下来呢？写动物的外形要学会两点：
一是要学会仔细观察。观察可以按从整体到部分或从部分到整体的顺 序进行。先从整体看，它的整个身子是什么样子的，全身的毛是什么颜色的。再按从头到尾的顺序一部分一部分地看：头、耳朵、眼睛、脚、尾巴是什么样子的。观察好了，就把观察的内容按顺序先练习说一说，然后写 下来。
二要学会抓动物的特点。动物都有头部、身子、尾巴、脚或翅膀，但各不相同。观察的时候就要抓住它们的特点。如猫的外形特点，主要是脸 上有一双会变的眼睛和长长的胡须，还有四只会捉老鼠的爪子。这是猫与别的动物不同的地方。观察的时候就要抓住这些特点。共9页，当前第1页123456789